SAT写作范文赏析

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  我们在考作文的时候,其实常常在想别人的作文是怎么写得这么好的,课窝教育小编给大家分享一篇范文,让我们一起看看别人的作文到底妙在哪!

  1、 在SAT语法答题的过程中,一定要记得,what,where本身就是介词加which的简化,所以之前不可加介词

  这篇文章先从一个贫穷孤独的小男生说起,分析了美国学校欺凌的现状,我们一起来看一下。


SAT写作范文赏析


  Over the Edge

  Picture a young, teenage boy; He has no friends and he is ignored at home. His family doesn’t have much money for clothes, so he often wears the same outfits. The things he wears are dark in color; he just wants to blend in. These efforts are pointless because he is still singled out. He’s called dirty and made fun of for the way he dresses; no matter what, he just can’t fit in. He’s alone and miserable; he’s angry at the world and God for letting it be this way. He’s approaching a new state of mind: depression. His life is grueling, with constant barrages of hate inflicted upon him. Whether they are verbal or physical, to him, they all mean one thing: nobody cares about him. He just wants it all to be over.

  美国本土高中生观点题型写作范文汇总,点击进入

  Bullying is a growing trend in American schools. It is a double edged sword that destroys the lives of targets one small blow at a time. Kids all over are singled out just like this. Some try to justify the things they do by saying that they are simply kidding, or the target shouldn’t have taken it so seriously. In reality, this is the worst kind of bullying. People convince themselves that the things they say are perfectly fine, and without even realizing it, continue to bombard a target with consistent hatred. These seemingly innocent words are often the ones that will leave the biggest impact on their victims and affect them the most after an extended period of time.

  Everyday teens are committing suicide because they cannot take the abuse any longer. They hate lives because of the way they are treated. From now on, when that “weird kid” is sitting alone, isolated from everyone else, or trying to join in on what is going on, instead of striking that person with the blade of hatred, say something nice and make that person feel accepted, because nobody knows exactly how close that person may be to the edge. Before the blow is made, think: how would it feel to deliver the final blow – the one that sends a person over the edge – the one that ends a life?

  重点词汇短语:

  ignore 忽略

  outfit 套装

  blend in 与..协调

  pointless 无意义的

  miserable 悲惨的

  depression 沮丧,萎靡不振

  grueling 使极度疲劳的

  inflict 把...强加给

  hatred 仇恨,憎恶

  看过这篇范文,你是不是知道SAT写作该怎么写了呢,如果还想了解更多SAT考试题型,可以在线联系我们!



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