雅思写作技巧英文文采

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　　当我们评价一篇中文文章“有文采”时，通常指的是它的遣词造句很出色。那么，在英文写作中，英文的文采如何体现呢?今天Super和大家分享雅思写作技巧之英文的文采!

　　一、用词

　　例1. In nature, though,diamonds are unremarkable平凡的. They are simply crystals of carbon, albeit尽管 crystals of a type that needs a fair amount of pressure to form.And carbon is the fourth-most abundant element in the universe. For that reason, diamonds are thought to be the commonest gemstones宝石 on Earth. Elsewhere in the cosmos宇宙, as demonstrated in a paper just published in Nature Astronomy, they are probably available in embarrassing abundance.

　　这篇文章的背景是：钻石因为稀缺而价格高昂，但在宇宙中组成钻石的物质其实并不稀缺。《Nature Astronomy自然天文学》杂志上最新发表的论文称，钻石这种物质在宇宙其他地方很常见，有多常见呢?原文的说法是：they are probably available in embarrassing abundance ，这里的embarrassing如神来之笔，它很好地说明了钻石的数量之多：已经多到令人尴尬的程度了。

　　例2. After passing Titan,Cassini will dive突然下降 back towards Saturn, but this time, it will not return. OnSeptember 15th, at about 1pm London time, it will kiss the outer edges of Saturn’s atmosphere and begin to tumble急速下降, losing contact with Earth.

　　卡西尼探测器在通过土星的卫星泰坦之后将会坠入土星，对于重返土星这一过程，作者用了kiss这个词，kiss在这里并不是“亲吻”的意思，而是指“touch lightly or gently轻触，轻拂”。这一词很形象地说明了卡西尼轻轻掠过土星外层大气的场景。

　　二、修辞

　　1. 排比

　　例：Martin Luther King的演讲I have a dream

　　I have adream that one day this nation will rise up and live out the true meaning of its creed信念: "We hold these truths to be self-evident, that all men arecreated equal."

　　I have a dream that one day on the red hills of Georgia, the sons of formerslaves and the sons of former slave owners will be able to sit down together atthe table of brotherhood.

　　I have adream that one day even the state of Mississippi, a state sweltering酷热难当 with the heat of injustice, sweltering with the heat of oppression压迫, will be transformed into an oasis乐土 offreedom and justice.

　　Ihave a dream that one day的排比在演讲中很有气魄，其实，我们在写作中也可以用排比，但因其难度较大，英语功底较好的同学也需慎用!

　　2. 比喻

　　例：J.K. Rowling，2008年哈佛毕业演讲

　　Iwas set free, because my greatest fear had been realised, and I was stillalive, and I still had a daughter whom I adored, and I had an old typewriterand a big idea. And so rock bottom最低点became the solidfoundation on which I rebuilt my life.【此处将人生的低谷比喻为重建新生活的基石】

　　Now,I am not going to stand here and tell you that failure is fun. That period ofmy life was a dark one, and I had no idea that there was going to be what thepress has since represented as a kind of fairy tale resolution决心. Ihad no idea then how far the tunnel extended, and for a long time, anylight at the endof it was a hope rather than a reality.【此处将“在人生低谷时的努力”比喻为在黑暗隧道中的摸索】

　　light atthe end of the tunnel是英语中的一个习语，含义是an expectation of hope that circumstances will improve after weatheringa difficult situation，即“黑暗尽头的光明、一线希望”。

　　3. 对仗

　　例：《卫报》上的一篇文章：How technology disrupted the truth

　　Now,we are caught in a series of confusing battles between opposing forces: betweentruth and falsehood, fact and rumour, kindness and cruelty; between the few andthe many, the connected有联系的and the alienated疏远的; between the open platform of the web as its architects envisioned想象 itand the gated enclosures of Facebook and other social networks; between aninformed public and a misguided mob暴民.

　　这一系列对比句写得行云流水，可见作者功力之深!

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