托福作文批改|28分：论据充分，逻辑清晰

　　今天给大家看看一篇托福高分作文。这次的主题是“线上课程与教室上课哪个更好？”这位同学得到了28分的高分，值得大家学习，大家可自行对比下自己的文章，学习一些套路吧~~

　　作文题目:

　　1. Some students enjoy  taking distance-learning courses on the computer or television. Other  students would rather take all of their courses with a teacher in a  classroom. Which of these options do you think is better? Use specific  reasons and examples in support of your opinion.

　　同意taking distance-learning courses

　　1.convenient and  save more money.

　　2.provide a variety  of courses flexible schedule.

　　3.traditional class  have some advantages, however, the thriving of online courses has proven  itself to be excellent.

　　作文内容：

　　The statement raises an  issue concerning whether the status of traditional class-teaching courses is  vibrated by the emergence of distance-learning courses. Two antithetical  viewpoints can be identified, one holding that students have easier access to  the classes thanks to  the distance-learning courses, the other arguing that the traditional  class-teaching courses still have their indispensable functions. Personally  speaking, I agree with the former%