雅思作文批改20分：关于学习，是自学还是一起学好

　　一般雅思评分从以下几个维度进行：是否切题、字数符合要求、论点和逻辑扩展（分论点）、语法（词汇、句式、连贯）、论述新颖。今天课窝网继续分享雅思作文范文：关于学习，是自己学还是大家一起学好。

       雅思作文题目：

　　Some students prefer to study  alone. Others prefer to study with a group of students. Which do you prefer? Use  specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

　　雅思作文内容：

　　Quite a number of people enjoy solitude, for the reason that  they believe working alone is more efficient, uncontrolled as well as a way  to exercise their ability, and I'm one of them. Admittedly, for students, studying  together is much morerelax [b1]compared with study on one's own as different students have  different speciality thus your problem can always be solved. I, however, still  strongly maintain that study alone satisfied me more.

　　Primarily, study along has higher efficiency since I will never  be troubled by anyone when study alone. With strangers around, no one will  talking to me so that I can concentrate on my work without any interruption. Where  there is aquaintance, there is communication. Inevitable, your hard work got  break in the time others speak to you. Everyone is sure to have the experience  that someone calling your name unremittingly when you are absorbed in your  work, you have no choice but to answer him, end up with a extend of time to  reach your daily plan.

　　Secondly, I can plan my own schedule which would not be  influenced by others. Conversly, though you have your own plan, you have to  adjust your schedule to the others when studying with a group of people as  you cannot be segregate among so many people. For example, I used to study  with my fiveroomate[b2], once they ask me to have lunch with them but I have a passage left  to read for the forenoon schedule. As a result I have to alter the study plan  to go with them. Whereas, I can always complete my plan with no one accompany

　　Last but not least, study alone can contribute to your  independent thinking ability, while studying together encourage the indolence  in thinking. If you are used to study alone, you wouldthought [b3]on your own everytime you encounter with troubles. Nevertheless,  you would turned to others for help withouthesitate [b4]if you are accustomed to team-study. Such are human beings that  when faced with problems, they lost their ability of independent thinking  once anyone reliable is nearby.

　　Undeniably, studying with others hasit's[b5]advantages, but students can benefit more from studying alone  in my opinion. Hence I reinforce my tendence to  study alone.

　　[b1]relaxing [b1]

　　[b2]roomate[b2]s

　　[b3]think

　　[b4]hesitation

　　[b5]its[b5]

　　针对问题最大的一点给出修改建议：

　　注意词汇的变化，从作文整体来看，在词性变化上，问题比较多，建议在写作中注意词汇的形容词，名词的正确使用。推荐看一些“词伙搭配”类的书籍。

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