雅思口语Part2:9-12月新题之Borrow something

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  在雅思口语中,很多Part2的话题,其实一两句就都可以说完,但是雅思口语Part2部分需要大家去说到2分钟,就需要很多的细节扩展。今天课窝网就和大家说说九月最新话题:Borrow something.

  Describe an occasion that you borrowed something from friends or family members

  You should say:

  What the thing was

  When you borrowed it

  Whom you borrowed it from

  And explain why you borrowed the thing

  先来看下答案里的四段:

雅思口语Part2:9-12月新题之Borrow something

  第一段铺垫了我为什么需要借包:

  Last year, like in December, I went to Beijing for a training and all the trainees were told to bring laptops since after the training everyone had to go through an assessment. It was only a 2-day training so I was wondering maybe I shouldn’t bring too many things with me, so I borrowed a really big backpack from my mom, as i need to bring a laptop with me. I do have a school bag but it is quite small, so the laptop couldn’t fit in. So I needed a larger one to carry heavy loads.

  第二段描述了包的外观,还借了一件羽绒服:

  It is a black backpack fitted with one large pocket for the laptop and several pockets for small-sized items, it has big capacity for all the items that i need for the trip. My mom did commercial air travel a lot, so she has not only lent me the bag, but also a down jacket, since the winter in my hometown is quite warm, i haven’t worn a down jacket for years. But the winter in Beijing, it is cold and feature strong winds. So i also have borrowed a down jacket to keep me warm.  

  第三、四段说了原因和感受:

  I thought I had made a good decision to have the backpack as carry-on bag for airplane travel. Because on one hand, i had more of my possessions at hand during the flight, and i have skipped the very time-consuming baggage claimprocess, and have avoided the risk of having the checked baggagelost or damaged. So i have spent less time on checking in the luggage and waiting in the line.

  After the 2-day training, we flew back home, we arrived at Kunming international airport at 1 am, some of my friends had to wait for the luggage claim for another 30 mins, however i had already hopped on a taxi and left. So i thought a backpack, or any form of hand luggage really saved people time and energy for air travel. So it was a time I have borrowed a bag from my mom and it was really useful.

  上面每一个段落其实都是亲身经历,细节是比较容易想出来。所以我比较鼓励同学们都要尽量说真实的东西,因为你经历过细节和感受就很容易说出来,而去编语料就很容易没有细节,说不到两分钟,流利度就会受到影响。

  评分标准分析

  流利度:再按照雅思评分标准来看一下这个答案, 可以看到一些连词、语气标记词的使用, 比如:since, because,on one hand, so,like, actually, 且内容是比较详细的, 流利度的分应该是拿到了。

  发音:在语音方面,只要同学们可以把每一个单词发正确, 其实语音就已经有6分了,要注意的是这些词的发音:比如luggage,possession, skipped。

  词汇:而词汇, 这个答案里是有一些比较好的词汇搭配的, 比如:heavy loads , strong winds, baggage claim processes, 还有一些比较贴近外国人用语习惯的,比如quite small, hop on. 当你的词汇能够辅助你把你要说的意思准确地表达出来,就是好的词汇。

  重难点剖析

  重点难点:这个题比较难的地方就是动词变位了,因为这是一个需要使用过去时态的题,很多同学在说动词变位的时候很容易出错,每天可以把分词表拿出来大声的朗读,每天重复的朗读背诵。

  还有多观察一些使用到过去时态的语段,都是可以帮助提升语法的,语法上比较容易出错的还有介词,比如在一点钟,是at, 上车下车用的是get on and off,介词是很多同学不太注意很容易丢分的部分,要多注意。

  小结

  新的题库刚刚发布出来,有一个趋势是很明显的,就是第二部分题目都有自己的限定词,很难准备了一个话题就可以套别的话题,所以我觉得同学们需要花时间像准备一个presentation一样,把每一个二的细节思路都想出来,而不是去套题目。所以思路上大家一定要简单有趣,说的过程中要自然。

  以上就是小编为大家介绍的关于雅思口语Part2中的话题范文。更多雅思考试官网、雅思写作评分标准等问题,可以咨询我们。

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