UKiset写作话题范文：成功的要求

　　因为大部分参加UKiset考试的考生母语并不是英语，所以理所当然的，作文写作就会成为比较有难度的一关。从一篇作文中，能看出的东西有很多：比如一个考生的单词拼写以及语法这种英语基本功，还有就是考生的想象力、思考能力以及逻辑能力等等。

　　话题

　　成功是一座冰山

　　范文

　　An iceberg marked with“success” stands on the sea, dazzling under the sunshine. However, under the sea are dedication, disappointment, hard work, sacrifice, etc., generally unknown to all.

　　The above picture reflects a common phenomenon that people are often attracted by the glory of success, instead of focusing on the hardships behind success. In real life, some people will be confused inevitably by visible success. Actually, many people, on the eve of success, have undergone the sufferings hard to imagine, including some people of worldwide fame. For instance, though deaf and blind, Helen Keller finally became a famous writer and educator because of her firm belief, clear objective and constant efforts. Thus it can be seen that it takes a great quantity of hard work and efforts to be successful. People are likely to be deceived by the iceberg illusion, mainly because of the unreality and impatience in the pursuit of success.

　　Apparently, we should treat success objectively by making a breakthrough of mental iceberg. On the one hand, we should realize anyones success cannot be done at one go. On the other hand, we also need to know success comes not by being willing to sacrifice, but by striving for what we want most.

　　一座标示着“成功”的冰山矗立在海面上，在阳光的照耀下显得格外耀眼。而海面下则是通常不为人知的奉献、失望、努力、牺牲等因素。

　　上面的图画画映了一个普遍现象：人们常被成功的光环所吸引，却忽略了成功背后的艰辛。在现实生活中，有些人会不可避免地被表面看到的成功所迷惑。实际上，很多人在尚未成功之前，都经历了常人难以想象的苦痛煎熬，其中包括一些世界名人。比如，虽然海伦·凯勒既失聪、又失明，但她秉承坚定的信念、清晰的目标和持续的努力，最终成为了著名的作家和教育家。由此可见，取得成功需付出非同一般的辛勤和努力。人们之所以很容易被冰山幻象所蒙蔽，主要是因为在追求成功过程中的不切实际和急于求成。

　　显然，我们应该突破心理坚冰，客观地看待成功。一方面，要认识到任何人的成功都不是一蹴而就的；另一方面，也需认识到成功并不是我们愿意去牺牲就能获得，而在于努力追求自己一心想得到的东西。

　　高分词汇

　　in the pursuit of 追求

　　undergo  v.经历；经受

　　at one go 一下子；一举

　　illusion  n.假象；幻想

　　dazzling a.耀眼的，炫目的

　　dedication  n.奉献，献身

　　glory  n.荣耀；辉煌成就

　　make a breakthrough 有重大突破或发展

　　句型分析

　　① However, under the sea are dedication, disappointment, hard work, sacrifice, etc., generally unknown to all.

　　本句可用来对图画细节进行描述。两大亮点：（1）采用倒装结构，将介词短语“under the sea”置于句首，避免头重脚轻；（2）形容词短语“generally unknown to all”作伴随状语置于句末，补充说明。

　　② Actually, many people, on the eve of success, have undergone the sufferings hard to imagine, including some people of worldwide fame.

　　本句可用于引出举例论证，一般是在该句后辅以具体的人物事例。文中以海伦·凯勒的例子来补充说明该句。本句先以介词短语“on the eve of success”作插入语，又以介词短语“including some people of worldwide fame”对主语“many people”进行补充说明，同时，形容词短语“hard to imagine”作“sufferings”的后置定语，使句式富于变化。而且句末介词短语“including…”的使用为下文列举人物事例做了很好的铺垫。另外，“some people of worldwide fame”用非常规手法表达出“世界名人”的含义，透露出作者小小的心机。简单的句子，却有着无比强大的功能，考生们一定要善加学习！

　　③ On the other hand, we also need to know success comes not by being willing to sacrifice, but by striving for what we want most.

　　在讲述事物的两个方面时，我们常用On the one hand,…On the other hand,…。这句话即是措施的另一方面。句中，“not…but…（不是……，而是……）”是作文中的常见句式，但是作者在其中套用了“by+doing”结构，指明获得成功的途径。句式前后对称，整齐漂亮。　　

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