点拨:SAT写作高分范文思路分析

2021-02-19 11:39 1323次浏览
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  单纯的写作文最直接考察到的,是我们两方面的能力——思维方式,语言表达。在我们整理好基础的分析方法之后,下一个挑战就是怎么通过合适的语言去表达出来我们想说的话。对于经历过托福洗礼的我们,正常表达一些思路应该不难。

  但是因为时间比较紧张,并且SAT写作评分标准里面提到了语言使用的多样性,所以建议大家在备考过程中,总结好常用的词汇和句型,在练习时反复使用,达到记忆和加快速度的目的。

  In addition, taxpayers will have to pony up for the added bureaucracy, and the higher regulatory costs foisted upon bag manufacturers and retailers will ultimately be borne by consumers in the form of price increases.



  我们可能会用常规思路去想,这是不是一个正常说后果的分论点,说到了“bag ban”对“taxpayer”的影响。但是我们可能不会想到,这是一个关于人天性的发问:利己。范文里这么写道:

  With key phrases like “taxpayers will have to pony up” and “borne by consumers,” Summers activates the nature of a human to act in their own self-interest. While one might view this as selfish, Summers reassures the reader that they are not alone in feeling this way, further contributing to his argument.

  甚至对于同一段话,不同的作文也会有不同方向的见解

  同样是“Bag Ban Bad for Freedom and Environment”的这一段:

  According to the U.S. Environmental Protection Agency, plastic bags, sacks, and wraps of all kinds (not just grocery bags) make up only about 1.6 percent of all municipal solid waste materials. High-density polyethylene (HDPE) bags, which are the most common kind of plastic grocery bags, make up just 0.3 percent of this total.

  有的文章分析道:

  A vast majority of people are misled about all of the waste that plastic bags cause when Summers writes, “... plastic bags, sacks, and wraps of all kinds (not just grocery bags) make up only about 1.6 percent of all municipal solid waste materials.” This number is definitely lower that we all assume, going into the passage, and we are left surprised.

  这里说到了论据让读者对自己的传统认知做出反思。而有的文章分析道:

  Knowledge is often viewed as power, and with information as direct as a statistic, Summers is handing that power to the reader – the power to agree with him.

  这里又从数据的信息传递作用上分析了论据对读者的影响。

  以上就是小编为大家整理的关于SAT写作考试高分范文分析讲解,希望对大家有所帮助。更多SAT官方报名、SAT考试报名费等问题可以咨询我们。


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