UKiset写作战术：突出中心，重视结构（二）

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　　UKiset写作是不同年龄的学生将对应不同的话题，写作字数必须达到最低要求。9-11岁最少100-150字；12-15岁最少200-250字；16-18岁最少300-350字，创意写作的作文将同成绩报告一起发给学校。上篇中小编为大家梳理的关于写作中的常见表达错误的汇总，本文将说说在结构内容的注意事项。

　　中心突出，层次分明

　　连接词是英语作文逻辑性的体现，这种表达不但中心突出，层次分明，也节省了构思的麻烦，不妨尽可能多使用。UKiset写作常用的连接词有以下几种：

　　1. 时间关系：to begin with, to start with, first of all, at the first place, what is more, last but not the least

　　2. 举例说明：a case in point, as an illustration, for one thing... for another, take... for example, to give another example

　　3. 解释定义：in other words, in simple terms, that is to say

　　4. 条件关系：as long as, on condition that

　　5. 递进关系：additionally, furthermore, in addition (to), moreover, not only... but also, what' s more

UKiset写作战术：突出中心，重视结构（二）

　　6. 强调关系：as a matter of fact, most important of all

　　7. 因果关系：account for, as a result, as a result of, because, because of, contribute to, due to, for this reason

　　8. 转折关系：on one hand... on the other hand, however, in contrast to, on the contrary

　　9. 比较关系：at the same time, have…in common, compared to, compared with, in comparison (with), similarly, similar to, the same as,

　　10. 总结归纳：According to what this essay has discussed above, it can arrive at the conclusion reasonably /naturally that….

　　不但句子之间讲究中心突出，层次分明，各段落之间，也要讲究“起承转合”，富有逻辑和层次。四级作文一般由三个段落构成，即起是一段，承和转是一段，最后的合是一段。

　　“起”的过渡词主要有nowadays, at present；“承”的过渡词有besides, moreover, furthermore, obviously, in addition, in other words；“转”的过渡词有however, on the other hand, but, instead, conversely；“合”的过渡词有therefore, in a word, in conclusion。

　　　借助谚语，名人名言

　　俗话说，他山之石，可以攻玉。名人名言和谚语往往比较引人注目，如果能在短文写作中恰当使用，很容易让阅卷人眼前一亮。为增强使用效果，建议各位：

　　1. 尽量用在开头结尾，或中间段落的开头，这样才能引起阅卷人的注意。

　　2. 平时多注意总结积累，每个话题都要背上几句。

　　3.使用谚语和名言时，前面一定要扣“帽子”，即解释性词句，不仅显得更为正式，还能够最大限度地吸引阅卷人的注意，为作文提分。

　　例如：

　　1.There is a famous Chinese/British saying, which goes on that where there is a will, there is a way.

　　正如一个著名的中国/英国谚语所言：有志者，事竟成。

　　2.There is a famous Chinese thinker in the seventh century BC whose name is Laotzu, and he points out that A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step. Therefore,....

　　正如公元前七世纪中国著名思想家老子所言：千里之行，始于足下。因此，……

　　3.There is a famous British playwright in the seventeenth century whose name is William Shakespeare, and he points out that...Therefore,....

　　正如17世纪英国著名剧作家莎士比亚所言：……（后面自拟内容）。因此，……

　　此外，四级作文中常用的英语谚语如下：

　　1．Actions speak louder than words.

　　事实胜于雄辩

　　2．Every road leads to Rome.

　　条条大路通罗马

　　3．Every dog has its day.

　　人人皆有出头日

　　4．Every man has his fault.

　　人非圣贤，孰能无过